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Comments CHAPTER 1: Impressions hm... I am not quite satsified with this one... don't you think it is cliché? There's a new guy in the school, he gets noticed by another guy, but someone else gets interested in him too, and shows it. I feel like ALL shounen ai stories start like that T_T;; *pouts* Well, I hope the next chapter will make my story somewhat different from the others =/ Hey, have you noticed that Anouk's face get uglier and uglier from page 1 to page 5???? o_o;;; I did those pages several months before pages 6 to 19... lol I hope I'll be able to make Anouk look much more pretier in the future !_! Same for Coloa ~_~;;
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