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CHAPTER 3: A Visitor

Well, here it is: chapter 3, with Rafae in it!! XD  I was looking forward to drawing him~  I hope I didn't butcher his face too much x_x  I worked so hard on the kissing scenes too!!  I'm not good at all!  lol  I shall improve my skills with the upcoming chapters~  XD

The last 2 pages (page 13 and 14) are so CHEAP!  and I'm so sorry about that...  But after drawing that hot scene with Rafae and Meros, drawing Meros' mom interrupting seemed so unfair...  *sigh*  I made her look older and fatter for the occasion!  LOL  naw, just joking ^_^;;  I was rushing so that I could update as fast as possible!  Why as fast as possible?  ...dunno, felt like it *dumb*  Anyway, I ended up messing Rafae's face too because of that x_x

I don't know if you understood what I was trying to do for the last pannel on page 14...  you know, the one with plenty of text and no image ^_^;;  well...  The thing is, when I draw SM, I see it like a cartoon (which is bad btw, anime and manga are 2 different things x_x).  So, when I wrote in the text for that last pannel, in my head, there was that cartoon scene.  You know, like when you hear the voices of the characters, but you don't see them, you see the house from outside, or a part of the room from where you can't see them?  XD  that was the idea...  to make it more efficient, I should have used a whole other page, but I really wanted to get it done with, so I slacked and I'm CHEAP when I slack ^_^;;  sorry...  ~_~

Ooooooh by the way: I still can't find back my dear Chiasm font, the font I used for chapter 1 and 2 of SM =/  so I end up trying plenty of new fonts.  I think I really like the one I used for the 7 last pages of chapter 3.  What do you think?  is it ok, or unreadable, or too wild, or fine or ???  ?  I think I'm gonna keep it :3